Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文內(nèi)容和英文提示詞匯，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞匯供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

隨著社會(huì)發(fā)展，一些學(xué)生在過生日時(shí)追求舉辦大型的生日晚會(huì)以示體面，這可能帶來一些問題。Kiddy對此非常困惑，假設(shè)你是Tony，請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容用英語給Kiddy寫一封信，闡述她的困惑，并給她提一些建議。詞數(shù)不少于80。

提示詞匯：染上……的惡習(xí)get into bad habit of…；舉辦hold。

Kiddy’s Problem	1. 不舉辦(hold)，同學(xué)、朋友會(huì)不高興；
	2. 要舉辦，花費(fèi)(cost)許多錢，感到煩惱(worried)；
	3. 浪費(fèi)(waste)時(shí)間，不利于學(xué)習(xí)；
	4. 容易染上抽煙、喝酒的惡習(xí)。
Your advice	送卡片作為(as)禮物；…… (至少補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn))

要求：1. 所給提示內(nèi)容必須全部用上，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、班級與學(xué)號。

Dear Kiddy,

I know your problem. First, ____________________________________________________

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Hope my advice is helpful.

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Kiddy,

I know your problem. In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays. I think this may bring some problems. First, they spend a lot of money. The students from poor families will feel worried, for they can’t afford an expensive birthday party. Second, they waste a lot of time in celebrating activities. It’s bad for their study. Third, it’s easier for some students to get into the bad habit of smoking and drinking.

I think it’s the right way for us to celebrate our birthdays by giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students, we should spend our money and time on study. Hope my advice is helpful.

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生們過生日的議論文。要求中只給出了主要要點(diǎn)，因此要求我們自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，只是需要注意不能遺留要求中的要點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文包含了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文章開篇點(diǎn)題，I know your problem. 特別是一些連詞的運(yùn)用，使語句更加通順，連貫。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用非常準(zhǔn)確，且做到了主謂一致，無語法錯(cuò)誤。結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。I think it’s the right way for us to celebrate our birthdays by giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students, we should spend our money and time on study.這些句子的運(yùn)用，使文章很有說服力，闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。