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【題目】【2013四川宜賓】第三節(jié)：寫作 （共1題，計(jì)12分） 最近媒體對(duì)“中國式過馬路”這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了尖銳的批評(píng)，請你以一個(gè)中學(xué)生的角色，寫一篇短文，對(duì)“中國式過馬路”這一現(xiàn)象加以評(píng)述。

注意：1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右，不可逐字翻譯。 3. 參考詞語：紅綠燈traffic lights, 缺乏交通安全意識(shí)lack traffic safety awareness 遵守交通規(guī)則obey the traffic rules Chinese Styles of Crossing Streets Chinese styles of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently. Nowadays, many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. Some people lack traffic safety awareness. Besides, some people are so hurry that they don’t want to wait for the green lights. However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others. So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents. For example, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished. As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules. What’s more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules. Only in this way can we cross streets safely.

【解析】

試題分析：對(duì)中國式過馬路現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行評(píng)述。根據(jù)提示可知這里敘述的是現(xiàn)在存在的一種現(xiàn)象，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在描述了該現(xiàn)象及原因后，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，要注意句子前后句子的連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語及句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：without looking at the traffic lights. Besides, However, What’s more,，F(xiàn)or example, so …that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句等，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。