Question

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用，請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名。

學(xué)校要舉行“My dream job in the future”主題演講比賽，要求大家以此為題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)，你的理由和所做的努力。

hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true

My dream job in the future

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My dream job in the future

My dream job is to be a writer. Reading is one of my hobbies. Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in. Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on. I wish I could be a writer and write many good books for the people.

Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories. Some of my teachers and friends say they are wonderful. I wish my dream would come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以My dream in the future 為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容要包括你夢(mèng)想的職業(yè)是什么、你選擇這一職業(yè)的理由以及你為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想所做的努力三個(gè)方面。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意這三個(gè)方面，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。題目中給了我們一些我們可能用到的關(guān)鍵詞，像hobby, favourite, free time, work hard, try to do, come true等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意意思連貫、完整，并且要有邏輯性。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文寫(xiě)得是比較優(yōu)秀的，在文章的開(kāi)頭作者就先點(diǎn)明了主題，自己夢(mèng)想的工作是當(dāng)一名作家，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，很直接。接下來(lái)敘述了自己選擇這樣職業(yè)的理由，并且理由很充分。第二段主要寫(xiě)了自己為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想所做的努力，并在最后表達(dá)了夢(mèng)想會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)的決心。內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫。文中還用到了一些較好的句型，如Whenever I am free, you can find me bury myself in the story books I am interested in、Those books help me know a lot about the world, such as history, geography, science, society and so on、  Now I’ve read quite a few books in Oxford Bookworm series, and written several stories等。

考點(diǎn)： 開(kāi)放類作文。