Question

【題目】眾所周知, 健康對每個人都很重要, 怎樣保持健康呢?我們可以適當運動, 比如：散步, 游泳等; 吃適量的蔬菜水果; 睡眠充足, 早睡早起等。請你以How to keep heathy?為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
提示：keep healthy, go for a walk, have enough sleep
How to keep healthy?

Answer 1

【答案】How to keep healthy?
As we all know, being healthy is very important to everybody. But do you really know how to stay healthy? Here are some useful tips. First, we should do exercise if we have time. For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper. Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.
【解析】這是一篇以How to keep healthy?為題的命題作文。
寫作步驟：
一、寫作內容包括：
（1）眾所周知, 健康對每個人都很重要, 怎樣保持健康呢?As we all know, being healthy is very important to everybody. But do you really know how to stay healthy?
（2）具體的建議有：①有時間應該做運動。 比如：飯后散步,夏天游泳等。we should do exercise if we have time.For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper. 因為健康可以使我們變得健康和強壯，Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. ②多吃蔬菜水果,不要吃垃圾食品和喝酒。we should take more vegetables and fruit. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. ③早睡早起，睡眠充足。we should go to bed early and wake up early．We should have enough sleep.
（3）總結。如果我們注意以上提到的建議，我們就會有更健康的身體。If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body.
二、連句成篇，在提建議時，可以用first，second，finally等表示順序的詞過渡。