Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)
在英語課上，同學(xué)們對以下漫畫展開了討論，請根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容和提示寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文（短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
提示：1）描述漫畫內(nèi)容；
2）分析父母的這種行為對孩子的影響（如感到被忽略，不利于孩子發(fā)展等）；
3）你認(rèn)為對孩子來說什么是最重要的。
首句:Some parents think money is what their children need most.
首句僅供選擇使用。
參考詞匯：feel left out, influence, development

Answer 1

【答案】Possible version:
Some parents think money is what their children need most. As we can see in the picture, Xiao Yu's mother has no time to stay with her son because she is busy making money to provide her son with the best education. However, Xiao Yu's reply is surprising. He decides to work hard and when he grows up, he will make much money to send her mother to the best old people's home.
For some parents, money is the only way to show their love. Children often feel left out. It influences their development. In my opinion, the best gift from parents is their love and care. Parents should spend more time with their children even though they are busy. (100 words)
【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容要想寫好圖畫式書面表達(dá)，同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意以下幾點：仔細(xì)審題。確定文體、時態(tài)及人稱。找全要點，兼顧圖內(nèi)圖外內(nèi)容。準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，盡量避免語法或拼寫錯誤。 把要點列出后，要善于把分散的要點用正確、簡明、地道的語句進(jìn)行表達(dá)，并按一定的邏輯關(guān)系連接。正確用好時態(tài)，單詞拼寫正確，避免漢語式英語等。同時注意調(diào)整好要點的出場順序。仔細(xì)檢查、修改。