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【題目】書面表達

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)技術(shù)的不斷發(fā)展，人們傳遞情感的方式也在不斷變化。假如你是王強，上周你就“使用紙質(zhì)卡片還是電子卡片？”這個話題在班級展開了一項調(diào)查。請你給China Daily報社寫一封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并說說你的觀點。

約30%的同學(xué) (紙質(zhì)卡片)	1. 手工制作，表達真情 　2. 攜帶方便，便于保存 3. ……
約70%的同學(xué) (電子卡片)	1. 信息量大，傳遞快捷 　2. 節(jié)約紙張，利于環(huán)保 3. ……
你的看法	1. ……　2. ……(至少兩條)

要求：1. 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2. 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)：100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or ecards？” in our class.

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Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or ecards” in our class.

About 30% of the students prefer to use paper cards. First of all, they are made by hand and they can express people's true feelings. Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long. Third, people can read them without computers.

However, around 70% of the students prefer to use ecards. For one thing, ecards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly. For another, using ecards can save paper so that it's good for environmental protection. What's more, people can design the ecards as they like.

As for me, I think we should use ecards more because they can not only help people save money but also protect the earth.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，介紹“使用紙質(zhì)卡片還是電子卡片”的調(diào)查結(jié)果以及你的觀點。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如prefer, be made by, be good for, as for me, be easy to do, first of all, second, third, however, what’s more, for one thing, for another等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。