Question

【題目】書面表達

幸福是什么呢?是父母細心的呵護，是成功時朋友的祝福，是幫助他人后會心的一笑，還是……？其實幸福很簡單，幸福就在你身邊。請你以“Happiness”為題，寫一篇英語短文，讓我們分享你的感受。詞數(shù)：不少于80。

溫馨提示：l、短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學(xué)校名稱。

2、這些詞匯也許對你有幫助：treasure(v. 珍惜)，comfort (v．安慰)，share (v．分享)

Happiness

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Answer 1

【答案】Happiness

Dad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom comes back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would come soon so that the whole family can get together!

【解析】

話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。