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【題目】文段表達(dá)。（10分）

根據(jù)中文和英文提示, 寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所要完成的回信內(nèi)。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李華, 今年春節(jié), 你的英國(guó)筆友杰克要來(lái)一個(gè)中國(guó)家庭做客, 他想知道中國(guó)人是怎樣送禮物或者接收禮物的, 春節(jié)期間要遵守哪些特殊的習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題, 給他回信提些建議吧。

提示詞語(yǔ): accept, immediately, break, clean

Dear Jack,

Nice to hear from you. _______________________________________________________

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I hope this helps and if you have any questions, just write to me again. Enjoy your stay!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

Nice to hear from you. I'm very glad to know that you’re coming to China for a short stay. I'd be happy to give you some advice.

When you visit a Chinese family, it’s a good idea to bring a small gift like fruits, tea, flowers, or something special from your country. Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return. In that case, you must accept it with both hands. Remember not to open it immediately but later.

Of all the festivals in China. the Spring Festival is the most important. There are some special traditions for you to follow. Try not to break anything. If you do, say “Suisuipingan” which means “be safe all the time”. You’d better not say the words “die, break, bad”. Besides, don’t clean your room on the first day of Chinese New Year, it will sweep away good luck.

I hope this help and if you have any questions, just write to me again. Enjoy your stay!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求告訴杰克中國(guó)人是怎樣送禮物或者接收禮物的, 春節(jié)期間要遵守哪些特殊的習(xí)俗。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱：一 是否要帶禮物。二 怎樣贈(zèng)與和接受禮物。三 春節(jié)期間應(yīng)遵守什么樣的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)慣。寫作提綱雖然已經(jīng)給出，但是很多其他內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者根據(jù)題目要求,回答了杰克的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如I'd be happy to give you some advice.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如When you visit a Chinese family, it’s a good idea to bring a small gift like fruits, tea, flowers, or something special from your country. If you do, say “Suisuipingan” which means “be safe all the time”. You’d better not say the words “die, break, bad”.等。