Question

【題目】親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，健康飲食對(duì)每一個(gè)人都是非常重要的。請(qǐng)你以“My healthy food and drink”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 以前我有不好的飲食習(xí)慣（如：不吃早餐、好吃垃圾食品等）。后來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)了健康飲食知識(shí)，認(rèn)識(shí)到健康飲食的重要性。喜歡看電視，讀英語(yǔ)故事，但現(xiàn)在不喜歡了；

2. 現(xiàn)在我堅(jiān)持健康飲食，保持身體健康。

提示詞匯：fruit vegetable hamburger cola junk food be bad/good for

3. 要求：語(yǔ)句連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，詞數(shù)80-100.

4. 短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My healthy food and drink

Two years ago, I often got up late and seldom had breakfast. __________

Answer 1

【答案】

Two years ago, I often got up late and seldom had breakfast. When I flet hungry, I always ate junk food. This was very bad for my health, so I was very weak.

Later, I learned something about healthy food and drink and I got to know it was very important to have a food life habit. Unhealthy food and drink is bad for everyone, while healthy food and drink can keep our bodies strong and healthy.

From then on, I have kept a good habit. Now I have a good breakfast every day and have lots of fruit and vegetables for lunch and supper. I often drink water, tea and milk but seldom eat hamburgers or drink cola. This makes me healthy food and happy. I always remember: eat the right food and keep healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要描述過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的飲食情況，因此多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: be bad for；get to know；keep our bodies strong and healthy；from then on；it was very important to have a food life habit；This makes me healthy food and happy。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。