Question

【題目】假如你最好的朋友叫Tom, 他身上有許多優(yōu)良的品質(zhì)，請以My best friend 為題，把你的朋友向大家做個介紹。

姓名	Tom
班級	七年級一班
興趣愛好	1）. 最喜歡金魚，喜歡觀看它們游來游去。 喜歡各種戶外運動，常去野營，喜歡呆在外面。
能力	1）. 文章寫得好、鋼琴彈得好 2.思維敏捷、計劃周密
品性事跡	1）. 樂于助人。是社區(qū)中心的志愿者，幫助人們解決各種問題。經(jīng)常參加為貧困的孩子募集錢這樣的活動。 2）. 勇敢(舉一例)

要求：1）條理清楚，語意連貫。
2）書寫規(guī)范，標(biāo)點正確。
3）正文80字左右。
My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

My best friend

Tom is my best friend. He is in Class One Grade Seven. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes goldfish best and he likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.

Tom has different abilities. He writes god articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful. He is a volunteer at the community center. He is ready to help people with all kinds of problems. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. He is also brave. Last week, he helped his neighbour out of the fire.

【解析】短文敘述的是朋友的情況，所以句子的主語用第三人稱單數(shù)，句子用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意不要遺漏要點，要注意句子的上下文的銜接，要用自己熟悉的句式，不要寫漢語式的英語，所寫的句子要符合英語語法。