Question

【題目】親愛的同學(xué)們, 三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了, 你們即將離開熟悉的母校和三年來朝夕相處并給予你們無盡關(guān)愛和幫助的老師及同學(xué)們。一想到以后就要與親愛的老師和同學(xué)們各奔東西, 你一定有很多話想說。請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章介紹一位給你印象最深的同學(xué)。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右, 提示詞僅供參考；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】I have met many different people in my junior high school. But Lily is the person who impressed me most. She is of the same age with me and she has many hobbies, such as singing, dancing and playing sports. Besides, she is friendly and warm-hearted.

I still remember I did rather badly in physics when I first began to learn it in my eighth grade. I couldn’t understand the teacher well in class and I didn’t dare to ask questions. After Lily knew it, she offered to help me with it. She showed me the right ways to study physics and explained the complex problems to me patiently. With her help, I made much progress and was able to follow my teacher.

Lily is really a good friend. I hope she could also pay more attention to her health besides studying hard. And I wish her happy forever.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文。介紹自己印象最深的一位同學(xué)，人稱為第三人稱，首先介紹這位同學(xué)的姓名，年齡，愛好和性格特征，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來描述，注意主謂一致。在第二段要去介紹印象最深的一件事情，可根據(jù)所提供的短語去組織內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，最后一段給自己的同學(xué)提出中肯的建議，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。