Question

【題目】【2016山東聊城中考】書面表達(dá)。

假如下圖是你學(xué)校的平面建筑示意圖，請你根據(jù)所給提示，以My School為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，介紹你學(xué)校的建筑布局情況并談?wù)勀銓�學(xué)校的看法。

注意：

1.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和考生姓名；

2.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My School

This is a map of my school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My School

This is a map of my school. In the middle of the school is a playground. The science building is on the right of the playground near the school gate. Behind the science building, on the right, is the library. Between this building and the dining hall is the classroom building. In front of the dining hall is the sports hall and the building in front of that is the office building.

My school is big, clean and beautiful. I'm happy to study and play in it every day. I like it very much.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇說明文寫作，要求按圖示，介紹一個(gè)校園的布局情況。寫作中要注意描寫的順序，用上恰當(dāng)?shù)谋硎痉轿坏脑~組及句型結(jié)構(gòu)來進(jìn)行表達(dá)。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文介紹自己的學(xué)校，以學(xué)校操場為中心，按照從右到左，從前到后的空間方位順序進(jìn)行描述。層次清楚。其中表示方位的介詞短語使用準(zhǔn)確，倒裝語序的使用，使短文更加生動(dòng)。