Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫張躍,你們學校評選年度“最佳學生”,你想推薦本班男同學劉彥。根據(jù)圖片信息向張校長寫一封推薦信。

要求：1、書寫規(guī)范,字跡工整

2、語句通順,條理清楚,不要遺漏要點。

3、詞數(shù)80詞左右,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I would like to recommend Liu Yan for this year’s Best Student Award.

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We all think Liu Yan should get the award. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Yue

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,

I would like to recommend Liu Yan for this year’s Best Student Award.

Liu Yan is my classmate. He is clever and does well in all his lessons. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Liu Yan is kind and helpful. He often takes part in some activities like collecting clothes and books for children in need. He often helps us fix broken desks and chairs. Last month, a 7-year-old boy lost his way and Liu Yan helped the boy find his home. Last weekend, he saved an old man from a fire.

We all think Liu Yan should get the award. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Yue

【解析】

這是一篇給定材料的提綱式作文。根據(jù)要點提示可知，要從三個方面去完成寫作：1.能力：聰明，各門功課優(yōu)秀，計劃周密。2.個性：善良，樂于助人。3.事跡：經(jīng)常參加一些為貧困兒童募集衣服、書本的活動；上個月，一個7歲的男孩迷路，他幫孩子找到了家；上周末，他從大火里救出一位老人。事跡也可以寫其他內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮的空間較大。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)，主語為第三人稱單數(shù)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。