Question

【題目】書面表達

為響應(yīng)我縣全面創(chuàng)建國家衛(wèi)生文明城市的號召，我校開展了“綠色射陽，健康生活 ”為主題的英語征文活動。請你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)在100詞左右；

2. 文中不得提及考生自己的真實姓名。

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Sheyang, it’s our duty to _______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

(One possible version)

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Sheyang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求寫一篇文章，主題為綠色射陽，健康生活。首先，要認真審題，掌握來信中的信息，需要回答的問題。然后整體把握寫作的大致方向，謀篇布局。結(jié)合以下要點：綠色生活方式，以及綠色生活的目的，展開細節(jié)，適當補充。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。各種短語句型表達的使用非常準確，固定短語“in this way，live a healthy life, In my opinion, In a word, make a difference等”以及復(fù)合句“As a citizen of Sheyang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.以及Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.”的使用，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，為文章增色不少。