Question

文段表達。

根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭和結尾已給出，其字數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內。請不要寫出你的姓名和學校。

假設你叫楊洋。是加拿大中學生Paula的筆友，下面是你收到的她的電子郵件。請你根據(jù)她來信的內容寫一封回信。針對她的問題，談談你的看法，同時提出一些幫助她解決問題的建議。

　　I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you．

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．When you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　Dear Paula：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．__________________ I believe if you work hard you’ll make some progress．Good luck!

yours Paula

Dear Paula,

Yours,

Yang yang

Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you：

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．If you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　書面表達評分標準：

　　第一檔：(15-13分)

　　完全符合題目要求，內容完整、豐富、健康。使用多種句型結構和豐富的詞匯。語言通順，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。

　　第二檔：(12-9分)

　　基本符合題目要求，內容基本完整。語法結構和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順，語意基本連貫，表達基本清楚。雖然有少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(8-5分)

　　部分內容符合題目要求，內容不夠完整。語法結構和詞匯錯誤較多，語言不通順，表達不夠清楚，影響整體理解。

　　第四檔：(4-0分)

　　與題目有關的內容不多，只能簡單拼湊提示詞語，所寫內容難以理解。