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【題目】假如你是李磊，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文介紹自己。1. 兩年前生活習慣不好，常感冒. 總是一個人待在家里。2. 醫(yī)生建議要有健康的生活方式。3. 我早睡早起，不吃垃圾食品，吃更多蔬菜，喝更多牛奶和水。4. 鍛煉身體和好的飲食習慣幫助我取得了好成績。

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【答案】My name is Li Wei. Two years ago I often had a cold because I had an unhealthy lifestyle. I always stayed at home with nobody. The doctor told me to have a healthy lifestyle. I listened to the doctor's advice. Now I go to bed early and get up early. I don't eat junk food often but eat more vegetables and drink more water and milk every day. I exercise once a day and have a healthy diet. Exercise and good eating habits help me get better grades than before.
【解析】本篇書面表達要求寫一篇文章來介紹自己。首先，要認真審題，掌握題目要求中的要點信息，需要回答的問題。然后整體把握寫作的大致方向，謀篇布局。要點為：1. 兩年前生活習慣不好，常感冒. 總是一個人待在家里。2. 醫(yī)生建議要有健康的生活方式。3. 我早睡早起，不吃垃圾食品，吃更多蔬菜，喝更多牛奶和水。4. 鍛煉身體和好的飲食習慣幫助我取得了好成績。寫作中運用到一般過去時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意上下文的過度�？梢詤⒖嫉墓潭ǘ陶Z有"have a cold；stay at home；tell sb to do sth；listen to the one's advice"等以及復合句和比較級句型的使用"Two years ago I often had a cold because I had an unhealthy lifestyle. Exercise and good eating habits help me get better grades than before."。