Question

【題目】《地豆英語(yǔ)》面向全國(guó)初中學(xué)生招聘小記者。假如你叫Gina Brown，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)給編輯部參加應(yīng)聘。

要點(diǎn)：1、介紹一下你的姓、名、電話號(hào)碼（8253-8974）；2、介紹家庭成員和職業(yè)：（父母都是老師，哥哥叫Dave，是個(gè)中學(xué)生）； 3、介紹一下你房間里的物品及物品的位置（至少3樣物品）。
要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)意連貫；2．自我介紹要包括要點(diǎn)中的所有內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．不少于60詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：student 學(xué)生 school things 學(xué)習(xí)用品 ground 地面
My name is Gina Brown.……

Answer 1

【答案】My name is Gina Brown. Let me tell you something about me. Gina is my first name, and Brown is my last name. My telephone number is 8253-8974. I have a happy family. My parents are teachers, so they help me a lot. And Dave is my brother. He is a middle school student, too. And we are in the same school. We love each other in our family. Now look! This is a photo of my room. But my room is not so tidy. A quilt is on the sofa. My school things are everywhere. A pen and a ruler are on the ground. A map of China is on the desk. Two apples are on the desk, too. It's terrible. I'm so sorry. But I really want to join you.
【解析】這是一篇看圖說(shuō)話的提綱性作文。《地豆英語(yǔ)》面向全國(guó)初中學(xué)生招聘小記者。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)給編輯部參加應(yīng)聘。
寫(xiě)作步驟：
一．閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。
1.我來(lái)告訴你一些關(guān)于我的事情。Let me tell you something about me.
2.Gina 是我的名字，Brown是我的姓氏。Gina is my first name, and Brown is my last name.
3.我有一個(gè)開(kāi)心的家庭，我的父母是老師，所以他們幫了我很多。 I have a happy family. My parents are teachers, so they help me a lot.
4.我喜歡家里的每一個(gè)人。 We love each other in our family.
5.這是我房間的一張照片，但是我的房間沒(méi)有這么整潔。 This is a photo of my room. But my room is not so tidy.
6.它是糟糕的，我很抱歉。 It's terrible. I'm so sorry.
7.但是我真的很想加入你們。But I really want to join you.
二．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵詞，短語(yǔ)和句子。
三．組詞成句，連句成篇。注意時(shí)態(tài)。