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衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問(wèn)題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛(ài)健康”為題的主題班會(huì),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶?寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的演講槁。
保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法，保持健康的結(jié)論。
1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物
2.多鍛煉健身強(qiáng)體;
3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣
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Answer 1

Dear boys and girls, 
I'm talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student
first you'd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope (繩子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don't eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.
Third you need enough sleep or rest. Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger.
Last you mustn't drink wine or smoke. They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you bye!

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心是以關(guān)愛(ài)健康為主題的。作者介紹了保持健康的重要性；保持健康的方法。有一定的先后順序。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者從三個(gè)方面介紹了如何保持健康，文中用到了一些固定句型how to keep health/fit疑問(wèn)詞加不定時(shí)短語(yǔ)；Don't eat too much meat and suger還用到了祈使句，這些句子給文章增色不少。