Question

【題目】書面表達

為了保護我們的母親河—秦淮河，Sunshine school 英語俱樂部準備舉行一次慈善行走活動。交流學生Max對此非常感興趣，想進一步了解相關信息。請你根據(jù)海報內(nèi)容用英文給他寫一封郵件，介紹此項活動。

注意：

1. 對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，郵件的開頭和署名已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Max,

As part of the Qinhuai River are still polluted with lots of waste, _____________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hai

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Max,

As part of the Qinhuai River are still polluted with lots of waste, we decide to organize a charity walk to make people realize the importance of environmental protection.

We are going to be divided into four groups, and each group separately collects garbage according to the prescribed routes. We plan to pick up waste paper, peel, cans and other garbage along the river. we’ll also hand out leaflets to tourists to promote environmental protection knowledge. Finally, We’ll sell garbage to waste station and all the money goes to charity. This activity will be held on the morning of June 30th,2019, and it will last three hours(from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.).

Would you like to go? Come and join us!

Yours, Li Hai

【解析】

本篇文章是寫一個活動計劃，應該用一般將來時，第一人稱敘述。要點要包括做這次活動的原因以及活動過程。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，運用了被動語態(tài)，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be divided into，pick up，hand out等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。