Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。

你或你身邊的同學(xué)是否也和Carnegie有著相似的經(jīng)歷呢?假設(shè)你校將舉行一場(chǎng)主題為“失敗乃成功之母”的英語演講比賽,請(qǐng)你寫一篇演講稿,談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

內(nèi)容包括:

1.描述你或同學(xué)的一次類似的經(jīng)歷;

2.談?wù)勀慊蛲瑢W(xué)在這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲(至少兩點(diǎn))。

作文要求:

1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

2.語句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning,everyone!I think everyone will agree with the saying that “Failure is the mother of success.”

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning,everyone!I think everyone will agree with the saying that “Failure is the mother of success.” When I was in Grade 7,I took part in the 100-meter race in the school sports meeting.I was not fast enough to win any prize.And I was really sad.But my mother told me not to give up.So I kept practicing running after school every day and won first prize in the race in the following year.From this experience,I learn that we should never give up when we are facing difficulties.And I think if we try hard enough,we’ll finally succeed.

Don’t be afraid of failures.If you learn how to deal with failures,you will surely taste success in the end.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇演講稿介紹自己或同學(xué)的一次經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勛约夯蛲瑢W(xué)在經(jīng)歷中的兩點(diǎn)收獲。因?yàn)槭茄葜v稿所以開頭要對(duì)聽眾進(jìn)行問候，結(jié)尾表達(dá)謝意。結(jié)合本文題材內(nèi)容可知，在描述過去的經(jīng)歷時(shí)，應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用過去式；在描寫經(jīng)歷中的收獲時(shí)，應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語的一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。