Question

【題目】書面表達（共1小題；滿分20分）

右側(cè)是一份英語學習自我評價表，每個評價項目后有若干個選項，請在符合自己實際情況的選項框中打√（可以多選）。根據(jù)你的選擇，以“My English Learning”為題寫一篇短文。介紹你英語學習的優(yōu)勢與不足，并針對自己的不足之處，提出改進方法。

注意：1. 語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

2. 詞數(shù)在80左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My English Learning

English is a very important subject at school.

Answer 1

【答案】

My English Learning

possible version

English is very important at school. With the help of the teacher, my English has improved a lot. I can remember most of the words I have learned. Of all activities I like pair work best, because I enjoy working with my classmates. For me, the most difficult part is speaking. We don’t often have the chance to speak English, so I find it really useful to take an active part in class discussion. What’s more, I’m still very weak at listening. I think I must listen to more English stories and tapes. And I believe I can learn English well by doing so in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將所提示內(nèi)容的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般過去時態(tài)，第一人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞。

寫作亮點：本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：With the help of在……幫助下；enjoy working with my classmates喜歡與我的同學們合作；have the chance to speak English有說英語的機會；所以在學習中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。