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【題目】文段表達（共15分）

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi)。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的真實校名和姓名。

假如你叫Liu Ying，你的好朋友Jane考試前總是緊張。盡管她刻苦學習，但一開始考試，她就忘了所有東西。她感覺自己好笨，也為此而感到苦惱。于是她通過郵件向你尋求幫助，請根據(jù)她的問題回復郵件。

提示詞語：nervous, stupid, clever, achieve, goals, when, attention, if, get

To Jane From Liu Ying Subject I believe you can do it Hi! Jane, I’m sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help. _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Ying

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【答案】

One possible version:

Hi! Jane,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help.

Sometimes, I have the same feeling as you. I also feel a little nervous before exams. Maybe everyone does. So I don’t think you are stupid and you are always clever in my mind.

Trust yourself. If you study hard every day, you’ll achieve your goals. When you’re taking your exam, pay attention to the questions and think over your answers and don’t worry about your grades. If you worry too much, it won’t help you get good results.

I hope my advice helps. Please write to me again if you need any more help.

Yours,

Liu Ying

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，通過回復郵件幫助朋友解決問題。結(jié)合所給提示，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱。文中要表達對Jane的理解及解決的一些辦法。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己也有這樣的問題，勸Jane要對自己有信心，相信自己，并表達了自己的一些建議。此處pay attention to,worry about等這些詞組的運用以及if引導的時間狀語從句的運用也讓文章增色不少。