Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)。

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加或一個(gè)單詞的刪除，其他錯(cuò)誤為單詞的修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧，并在其下面寫出增加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(\劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處。

There is many rules in my family. One of them is that me have to go to bed before 10 pm. I agree with this a rule. I think students like me need to get lot of sleep. Then it is easier for me to concentrate(集中注意力) and listen the teacher in class.I always obey this family rule，but I am unhappy about other rule in my home. The rule is that I'm not allow to have a pet dog. My parents are afraid that I will spend too many time on the dog，and I think that a pet dog is just like a good friend .I can talk to it when I feel alone or unhappy，so I will have a talk with my parents later.

Answer 1

【答案】There is, are many rules in my family. One of them is that me, I have to go to bed before 10 pm. I agree with this a(\去除a) rule. I think students like me need to get lot, lots of sleep.Then it is easier for me to concentrate(集中注意力) and listen ∧,to the teacher in class.I always obey this family rule，but I am unhappy about other, another rule in my home. The rule is that I'm not allow, allowed to have a pet dog. My parents are afraid that I will spend too many, much time on the dog，and, but I think that a pet dog is just like a good friend .I can talk to it when I feel alone,lonely or unhappy，so I will have a talk with my parents later.

【解析】

本文介紹了作者家里的兩條家規(guī)，其中第一條家規(guī)是關(guān)于不得不在晚上十點(diǎn)前睡覺的，作者表示贊同，另一條是不被允許有一只寵物狗，作者對(duì)此不能接受。

1、句意：我們家庭里有許多家規(guī)。這是一個(gè)there be句型，be動(dòng)詞后緊跟的名詞是rules，是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，因此be動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用are。

2、句意：其中一條是我不得不在晚上十點(diǎn)前睡覺。這里是表語從句的主語，只有人稱代詞的主格才能做主語，要把me改成I。

3、句意：我同意這條規(guī)定。This 是指示代詞，不與不定冠詞同時(shí)使用，所以要?jiǎng)h去不定冠詞a。

4、句意：我認(rèn)為像我一樣的學(xué)生需要大量的睡眠。短語“大量的”是lots of，所以要把lot改成lots。

5、句意：然后，對(duì)于我來說，在課堂上集中注意力聽老師講話就會(huì)更容易。Listen是不及物動(dòng)詞“聽”，要想表示“聽老師的”需要補(bǔ)充介詞to，即listen to the teacher。

6、句意：我總是遵守這條家規(guī)，但是我對(duì)于家里的另一條家規(guī)卻不滿意。Other意為“其他的”，其后加名詞復(fù)數(shù)，這里是表示對(duì)“另一條”家規(guī)不開心，用another即可。

7、句意：這條規(guī)則是我不被允許有一只寵物狗�！拔摇敝荒苁恰氨辉试S”，所以需要使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)be done，動(dòng)詞“允許”allow的過去分詞是allowed，故將allow改為過去分詞allowed。

8、句意：我的父母害怕我會(huì)花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間在狗上面…。Time是名詞，意為“時(shí)間”，是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用many來修飾，many只能修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，much可以用來修飾不可數(shù)名詞，意為“很多”，故將many改為much。

9、句意：…但是我認(rèn)為一只寵物狗就好像是一位我的好朋友。前句將父母不同意，這里是表達(dá)作者對(duì)寵物狗的渴望，構(gòu)成了轉(zhuǎn)折，用連詞but。

10、句意：我可以和它說話，當(dāng)我感到孤獨(dú)或是不開心的時(shí)候，所以我會(huì)之后和我父母交談一下的。Alone意為“獨(dú)自一個(gè)人的”，沒有情感色彩，這里更應(yīng)該用lonely，意為“孤獨(dú)的”，故將alone改為lonely。