Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿分15分)

南京市政網(wǎng)上貼出了一張海報(bào)，評(píng)選幸福指數(shù)最高的社區(qū)。請(qǐng)閱讀海報(bào)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一份推薦信，介紹你所在的社區(qū)。

[注意：

1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear sir:

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir:

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing. I know you are looking for the happiest neighbourhood in Nanjing. We just live in such a neighbourhood. Our neighbourhood Xingfuxiaoqu is so clean and beautiful. The people are very friendly to each other. We get along well with each other, too. People often help clean the streets and water the grass and flowers. The children always played happily in the garden of the community after school. The old people take line dance on the square every night. How happily we are living!

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jian

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求你寫(xiě)一封書(shū)信。本文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)敘事為主。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理，語(yǔ)言流暢、感染力強(qiáng)。如: such a neighbourhood，be very friendly to , each other, get along well with, help do,looking forward to 等；還有感嘆句的恰當(dāng)使用, 為文章增色不少。