Question

【題目】作文。

假設(shè)你叫王華，收到筆友徐麗的email。她向你請教如何合理安排寒假生活。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語回復(fù)徐麗的email。

要求：1.不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名；2.回信需要包括所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)不少于90詞 (文章開頭和結(jié)尾，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Xu Li,

How time flies! I’m happy to talk about my coming winter vacation.

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I’m looking forward to your e-mail about your winter vacation.

All the best!

Wang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Daer Xu Li,

How time flies! I’m happy to talk about your coming winter vocation.

First, doing more exercises can provide you with better health. Second, travelling can relax yourself and you can enjoy your winter holiday. Third, it is useful to take part in some social activities. It can enrich your experiences. Last but not least, you also can learn something useful at home. It will make you easier to study in the future.

I’m looking forward to your reply about your meaningful winter vocation.

All the best!

Wang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求你寫一封書信，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)敘事為主。文章應(yīng)靈活采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準確、簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點： 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如: provide you with better health，take part in, make you easier, in the future， doing more exercises動名詞詞組作主語，it is useful to take part in some social activities.句型等；同時First, second, third等詞的應(yīng)用使文章的表達更有邏輯性、更富有條理；通篇語言流暢、內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。