Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某中學(xué)自開展“向陽光少年學(xué)習(xí)”的活動以來，我們的身邊涌現(xiàn)了許許多多的“陽光少年”，請你以“A Sunshine Teenager”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹一位你身邊的“陽光少年”（假如這位陽光少年名叫XiaoHui）。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 星座是Aries, 誠實(shí)善良、樂于助人；

2. 最喜歡黃色，因?yàn)辄S色….(請自擬一點(diǎn))

3. 積極參加各種課外活動, 上周參加繪畫比賽并獲第一名。

4. 積極為父母分憂, 比如…(請舉一例)；

5. 你的感想（請自擬兩點(diǎn)）

寫作要求：

1.詞數(shù)不少于90（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）;

2.內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。

Hello! My name is Xiao Ming. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

Xiao Hui is one of them. _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello! My name is Xiao Ming.I’m studying in No.1. Middle School. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

Aries is one of them.He is honest and kind. He gets on well with others.He is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people’s homes to do something for the olds.He reads newspapers for them, cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also, he is warm-hearted, active and outgoing.He always shares all kinds of his parents ’housework, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and making dinner. He is never afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports.After school, he plays football with his teammates. And he joins the school clubs, like music,art and chess. He learns a lot from his all activities.

Aries is my good sunshine teenager.I should learn from him.

【解析】

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寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。