Question

【題目】某英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站正在開展主題為＂How can a teenager have a successful life?＂的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)	你的觀點(diǎn)
努力學(xué)習(xí) 尊重父母 服務(wù)社會(huì) 計(jì)劃未來	……（至少兩條）

注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；

（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；

（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；

（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：尊重respect

I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

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Answer 1

【答案】【參考范文】

I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.

From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.

【解析】1. 本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)。寫作的話題為討論“How can a teenager have a successful life?”，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意，根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。

2. 閱讀提示，弄清楚所有的信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。

（1）大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為努力學(xué)習(xí)是很必要的，因?yàn)?/span>……。most students believe…

（2）他們還一致同意應(yīng)該尊重父母。respect parents

（3）此外，準(zhǔn)備好服務(wù)社會(huì)在他們看來是有意義的。serve the society

（4）而且。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該為將來做計(jì)劃。make a plan for future

（5）就我而言，我需要交一些朋友，可以相互學(xué)習(xí)。from my point of view; make friends

（6）另外，積極鍛煉以保持健康對(duì)于成功的生活來說很重要。keep healthy

3. 根據(jù)以上的分析，組詞成句，連句成篇。

4. 注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意使用副詞，短語(yǔ)或句子，使上下文連貫，邏輯緊密。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語(yǔ)從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。