Question

根據(jù)所給中文提示語，以“Saving the Earth’’為題寫一篇80字左右的段文。注意語句擴(kuò)展，意思連慣。段文開頭已給出。

中文提示語：1.任何保護(hù)環(huán)境已成為世界最大難題之一。

2垃圾污染環(huán)境、損害健康，不要到處扔垃圾。

3.廢水流到江里、湖里和田地里，污染農(nóng)作物，殺死大量的魚。

4.保持環(huán)境干凈和整潔。我們只有一個(gè)地球，應(yīng)該保護(hù)她，使我們的家園更加美麗。

所給詞語：pollute , harm, throw, rubbish, pour, try one’s best

Saving the Earth

How to protect the environment becomes…..                                                

                                                                                      

                                                                                    

                                                                                     

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Saving the Earth

How to protect the environment becomes one of the biggest problems in the world. We can find the rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields, which can pollute plants; sometimes it can kill lots of fishes. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We have only one earth. So we must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)所給中文提示語，以“Saving the Earth’’為題寫一篇80字左右的段文。要把污染的嚴(yán)重情況和保護(hù)環(huán)境的必要性寫清楚。所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)應(yīng)該怎么做。 注意語句擴(kuò)展，意思連慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)要求做的事情，如用should\must表示應(yīng)該等。運(yùn)用了一些非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如how to do, try our best還運(yùn)用了 which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。并注意了句子開頭的變化和句子之間的銜接如用 not only…but also 、So等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。