Question

【題目】

過去	被動聽講；缺乏思考；作業(yè)量大；考試頻繁（或自擬內(nèi)容）
現(xiàn)在	自主學(xué)習(xí)；合作交流；作業(yè)適量；活動豐富（或自擬內(nèi)容）
我的感受： ……（請考生自擬兩點內(nèi)容）

注意：

(1) 表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

(2) 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

(3) 表達(dá)中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。

Great changes have taken place in the ways of studying in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Great changes have taken place in the ways of studying in our school.

In the past, we spent much time listening to teachers in class. There was not enough time for us to think by ourselves. And we had to do lots of homework. Many tests made us feel bored about studies.

But now in class, we can learn in our own ways. We often work in groups and share our ideas. Moreover, we don’t need to do much homework. And different kinds of after-school activities make our school life colorful.

I think these changes are so great that they help us relax. We can learn better and more happily now. \

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，描述學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)方法的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如in the past, spend ...in doing/on sth, enough, by oneself, in one’s own way, in groups, moreover, make+adj等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。