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假如你是來自英國(guó)的Mary,在中國(guó)居住了兩年,去過很多地方。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列五個(gè)問題的提示,給遠(yuǎn)方的好友Linda寫信,向她介紹你在中國(guó)某地的一次旅游經(jīng)歷。

Questions:

1.Where did you go?

2.How did you go there?

3.What did you see?

4.What did you do?

5.What do you think of the trip?

注意:

1.信的內(nèi)容必須包括以上五個(gè)問題;

2.詞數(shù)不少于60詞;

3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

Dear Linda,

How’s it going?As you know, I have stayed in China ________________

Yours,

Mary

答案:
解析:

  Possible version:

  Dear Linda,

  How’s it going?As you know, I have stayed in China for 2 years.I have been to many interesting places.Last month, I went to Beijing by plane and had a wonderful time there.First, I went to the Tian’an Men Square.Then I visited Hutong and some famous museums.Next, I had Beijing Duck, which is one of the most traditional foods in Beijing.I also went to the Summer Palace-the most beautiful royal garden in China.Besides, I watched Beijing Opera, which is well-known to the world.I really love Beijing.I think it’s a mixture of traditional and modern culture.

  If you have time, why not visit Beijing?

Yours,

Mary

  書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

  第一檔:(8-10分)

  完全符合題目要求,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)清楚,內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯,語(yǔ)言通順,語(yǔ)意連貫,具有邏輯性。

  第二檔:(4-7分)

  基本符合題目要求,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)基本清楚,內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順,語(yǔ)意基本連貫。有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,但不影響整體理解。

  第三檔:(0-3分)

  部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)不夠清楚,內(nèi)容不夠完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多,語(yǔ)言不通順,只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ),所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。


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