Question

【題目】書面表達（本大題共10分）

假設你發(fā)現(xiàn)同學間有抄作業(yè)現(xiàn)象，請根據(jù)表格內容用英語寫一篇題為“Stop copying others' homework．please”的短文刊登在英語學習輔導報上。

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點，要點語句通順、意思連貫。

2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework. Some students find there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult. Others spend too much time playing computer games and chatting on the Internet. As a result， they often fail the exams and some even lose interest in study.

I think it is helpful for us to make a list of the things we need to do. We should study hard instead of playing computer games. And we can also ask our teachers for advice if we meet problems.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，寫出原因，結果，建議。我們應用正確的英語將這些內容表達出來。寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且所使用的詞匯和句型，是學生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求寫作，結構清晰，要點全面。而且作者在寫作時，將這些信息進行了整合，讓意思關聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達，這一點很好。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強了文章的連貫性。如賓語從句there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult。 it is helpful for us to make a list of the things。if we meet problems.定語從句we need to do.介詞短語instead of playing computer games.句式：Somebody spend time doing. As a result.