Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的郵件。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

66.假如你叫魏明，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike通過郵件，想知道在生活中誰(shuí)是你的榜樣？請(qǐng)你向Mike介紹：你的榜樣是誰(shuí)？你的家人朋友、老師或同學(xué)…….他/她的性格如何？為什么你認(rèn)為他（她）是你的榜樣，你從他/她身上學(xué)到了什么？

提示詞語(yǔ)：role model, kind, helpful, help, work hard, hope

Answer 1

【答案】

My role model Jack is kind and helpful.

At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good grades in exams. However, I am not good at studying, so he not only helps me with my homework about every subject but also tells me to work hard in order that I can catch up with others as soon as possible. With his help, I have made great progress in my study and I thank him very much.

I think I’m lucky to have Jack as an example. From now on, I’ll never give up and try my best to study better and better. I hope I can do as well as Jack and be respected by others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文。要求考生按照題目的要求，寫一篇連貫的文章。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫，主旨健康，中心突出但同時(shí)切記不能完全照抄原文的翻譯。此外，考生在進(jìn)行寫作的時(shí)候，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，使文章的內(nèi)容更生動(dòng)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。復(fù)合句的使用 “so he not only helps me with my homework about every subject but also tells me to work hard in order that I can catch up with others as soon as possible.”可看出學(xué)生的寫作功底非常深厚。