Question

【題目】你校正在開展主題為“What should a good student be like?”的討論，校園小記者采訪了一些老師和家長。請根據(jù)采訪內(nèi)容，結合自己的觀點，用英語寫一篇短文與大家分享。

要求：

1、用上表格中所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，100詞左右（短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2、不得引用或抄襲試卷前面閱讀材料中的語句，否則不予賦分；

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名，否則不予賦分；

4、請在答題卡指定位置作答，否則不予賦分。

What should a good student be like?

Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think_______________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think that on the one hand, we should love our country and follow the school rules. On the other hand, we should get on well with others and treat others politely.

As for parents, we are supposed to be not only healthy and happy but also kind and confident.

As far as I am concerned, to be a good students, we should protect the environment because we only have one earth.

Even if there are many different ideas about what should a good student be like, we need to do what we should do.

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，主要講述不同的人認為一個好學生應該是什么樣子的。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如on the one hand...on the other hand、follow the school rules、get on well with、as for、be supposed to、not only...but also...、as far as I'm concerned等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。