Question

【題目】書面表達。

根據(jù)圖示，簡要介紹一下如何才能保持健康，并展開想象，適當發(fā)揮。要求：詞數(shù)90個左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

All of us want to be healthy._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以健康為話題，談一談在生活中應該如何保持健康。題目中給了我們一個圖示，通過這個圖示我們可以看到，想要保持健康，我們應做好三個方面，一是要多運動，然后是要有足夠的睡眠，最后是注意飲食習慣。我們也可以發(fā)揮自己的想象，補充一些內容。通過分析可知，這篇作文我們應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱We來敘述。寫作時，除了注意短文的內容之外，還需要注意表達要符合英語的表達習慣，多使用一些自己平時積累的好的短語和句型，使短文更加流暢、連貫。

寫作亮點：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求，加上自己的合理想象，跟我們講述了如何保持健康。首先作者點明了健康的重要性，然后作者從四個方面講述了如何做我們才能保持健康。短文的結構很清楚，意思也很完整。另外在表達時，作者使用了較多的句式和句型，不僅準確，而且這些句型的使用增強了文章的流暢性。例如Staying up late is bad for our health.、We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.、Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.、If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.等。