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【題目】我們生活學(xué)習(xí)在美麗的甘肅。假設(shè)你所在的學(xué)校正在組織一個(gè)“讓世界了解甘肅、讓甘肅走向世界＂的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"為題，寫(xiě)一篇介紹甘肅的英語(yǔ)短文。

要求:1.文中需包含思維導(dǎo)圖中的主要內(nèi)容;

2.句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;

3.可做適量拓展;

4.詞數(shù):80詞左右。(標(biāo)題需抄寫(xiě)在答題卡對(duì)應(yīng)作答區(qū)域，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Introduction of Gansu Province

Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers.There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu, May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass, the western end of the Great Wall, are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，介紹甘肅省。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。