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【題目】隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)(smartphone)已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞左右的短文。

要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．題目與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

現(xiàn)象
弊端	影響與家人、朋友的關(guān)系(relationship)；容易引發(fā)交通事故；對(duì)身心健康有害，不利于學(xué)習(xí)和工作。
觀點(diǎn)	正確利用手機(jī)；面對(duì)面交流勝過(guò)網(wǎng)上聊天……

參考詞匯：1.have influence on　2.focus on　3.facetoface conversation　

4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbersa

With the development of the Internet，smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

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Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!

Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the Internet，smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.

While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones.It has bad influence on the relationship with their relatives and friends.Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still focus on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents.It's too dangerous.And others stay up playing games.I think it really does great harm to their health，study and work.

In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart phones.Don't depend on them too much.And I do believe that facetoface conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online.

Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!

【解析】本文屬于材料型作文，要表達(dá)“低頭族”的危害以及你的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如while, be busy doing, have influence on, even worse, focus on, do harm to, in my opinion, make good use of以及had better。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。