Question

請根據申請表內容完成90詞左右的申請信

Name	Zhao Yang	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Tele. number	0519—82835988	Email	8344506@qq.com
School	No.6 Middle School	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英語	Interests and hobbies	收集各種動物圖片、聽音樂
reasons	喜愛大自然，對植物動物感興趣， 想要更多的了解鳥，人們砍伐樹，鳥越來越少，想做些事情來保護鳥
Free time	每周日全天

Dear Chairperson,

    I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.

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Yours sincerely,

Zhao Yang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Dear Chairperson,

I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.

First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 at No.6 Middle School. My favorite subject is Biology and English. I am interested in collecting the pictures of different animals and listening to music.

Last spring, I went to Zhalong Nature Reserve and took part in activities to protect birds with my friends, I enjoy the natural world, and I’m interested in learning different kinds of plants and animals. I want to know more about the birds.

Some people want to cut down trees. As a result, the number of the birds is becoming smaller and smaller. I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. I can take part in activities all day every Saturday.

I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on 0519-82835988 or email me at 8344506@qq.com.

Yours sincerely,

Zhao Yang

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫自己的個人情況，包括所在學校、星座、性格、愛好，然后寫自己的煩惱，最后請求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如be interested in, listen to， take part in, different kinds of ， cut down， as a result， smaller and smaller.， all day，call me on ，email me at 等短語，文中還用到了條件狀語從句 if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society.賓語從句 I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. 文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文