Question

2013年，湖南衛(wèi)視明星親子真人秀節(jié)目《爸爸去哪兒》連續(xù)十期收視奪魁，并問鼎年度上星頻道中收視最高的季播節(jié)目。你班同學(xué)也非常喜歡看，并關(guān)于“什么樣的爸爸才是好爸爸”展開了討論，請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語簡要的介紹并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

注：詞數(shù)80-100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

??? 大家的觀點(diǎn)	特點(diǎn)
??? 大部分學(xué)生	和孩子做朋友，和孩子一起玩，讓孩子開心
一些學(xué)生	孩子犯錯時(shí)嚴(yán)肅批評（criticize），幫助孩子進(jìn)步
少數(shù)學(xué)生	細(xì)心照顧孩子，孩子可以依靠爸爸
你	……

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father._____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father。Most of us think a good father should make friends with their children,paly with their them and make them happy.Some of us think the father should be a serious one.When they make mistakes, he criticize them seriously, help them with their progress. Few of us think the father should look after then carefully. The children can depend on their fathers. I think a good father should be a good teaher first, and then a good friend, because we learn from them and live with them.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:make friends with和……叫朋友；play with和……一起玩耍；help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；look after照看，照顧；depend on依靠，依賴；learn from向……學(xué)習(xí)等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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