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假如昨天你們班以“Should We Keep Animals in Zoos? ”為開展了一次英語討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的報(bào)道，介紹討論會(huì)的大概情況，第一句已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

20 students	Should keep animals in zoo	人們可以在動(dòng)物園里看到很多種類的動(dòng)物(all kinds of )。 動(dòng)物們?cè)趧?dòng)物園里可以得到很好的照顧(take good care of)。
30 students	Shouldn’t keep animals in zoo	動(dòng)物們被關(guān)在籠子(keep in the cage)里，無法獲得自由(get freedom)。 動(dòng)物喜歡生活在自然環(huán)境中(live in the nature)
Your opinion	…	…

Yesterday we had a discussion about if we should keep animals in zoos.  ____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Yesterday we had a discussion about if we should keep animals in zoos. Twenty of us thought that animals should be kept in zoos. Then we can see different kinds of animals there and all the animals will be taken good care of. Thirty students had a different opinion. They thought that animals shouldn’t’t be kept in zoos，because animals come from the nature and they love to live in the natural environment . If they are kept in the cages, they can’t move here and there. Keeping animals in cages is really bad for them.

【解析】

試題分析: 本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于動(dòng)物園養(yǎng)動(dòng)物的議論文。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫作中注意應(yīng)用材料中所給的短語及句式。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。