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研究表明音樂對人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂來調節(jié)心情。請根據下表提示內容，寫一篇英語短文。

聽音樂前的情緒狀態(tài)	適用音樂	聽音樂后的心境
壓力大，過分焦慮	流行音樂	放松
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過度	鄉(xiāng)村音樂	平靜
困倦，疲勞	搖滾音樂	振奮
孤獨，悲傷	（考生自似）	（考生自擬）

注意：1．詞數80左右，開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數；2．內容必須包括上表中的要點；3．條理清楚，語句連貫；4．文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名等信息。

（參考詞匯：搖滾音樂rock music）

A research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much.

another possible version:

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇音樂的議論文。本題所給材料較為詳細，故動筆前先要認真閱讀材料，確定寫作內容。寫作中主要將各種情緒狀態(tài)及適合的音樂介紹清楚。結合語境可知本文主要是用一般現在時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱問題較為復雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復讀幾遍，適當修改。

寫作亮點：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；賓語從句如 that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定語從句如who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；條件狀語從句如If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；時間狀語從句如When I feel lonely and sad；目的狀語從句如 so that you will feel excited again；結果狀語從句如so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。