Question

寫(xiě)作：.某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇90字左右的短文。

過(guò)去 1.生活貧困，房屋破舊。

2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾滿(mǎn)地。

3.交通不便，游客很少。  

現(xiàn)在1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車(chē)。

2.環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán)......

3.旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自世界各地的游客。

將來(lái)  請(qǐng)你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)

注意：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分。

2.標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3.小詞典：環(huán)境environment; 污染pollution;方便convenient.

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.

Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.

I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.  

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作條理非常清晰，首先對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)1.生活貧困，房屋破舊People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾滿(mǎn)地Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.3.交通不便，游客很少The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.三點(diǎn)表達(dá)的恰到好處；然后對(duì)現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，按照題目中所給的提示進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)的過(guò)程注意多使用被動(dòng)形式如Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.能夠很好的看出寫(xiě)作者的語(yǔ)言功底；最后展望家鄉(xiāng)會(huì)變得越來(lái)越好I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語(yǔ)的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。對(duì)于中考的作文，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫(xiě)出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。