Question

【題目】書面表達

在“八禮四儀”教育活動中，同學(xué)們收獲很大，尤其是李偉同學(xué)。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文，敘述李偉在活動前后的表現(xiàn)。詞數(shù)在100詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

	In the past	At the moment
Li Wei	come to school late quarrel with others make noise in class throw rubbish everywhere	come to school early be friendly to others listen to the teachers carefully help collect rubbish
Your advice

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. _________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. In the past, he often came to school late. He used to quarrel with his classmates. He made a lot of noise in class. Sometimes he played computer games too much. His parents and teachers all worried about him. They talked with him patiently.

Now, he has changed a lot. He comes to school on time. He is friendly to his classmates. He listens to the teachers carefully in class. He often helps collect the rubbish with other students. He can finish his homework on time. All the teachers and classmates like him very much.

I hope our class will organize more activities. Our classmates will take part in them actively. We will certainly be more helpful, more friendly and more skillful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了不少固定短語如：used to過去常常；on time準(zhǔn)時，按時；take part in參加。還使用了一些復(fù)合句如I hope our class will organize more activities.等等，這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。