Question

【題目】 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。

Subject	The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
Ways of doing	ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…
Your opinion	……(至少2條)

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)80-100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。

The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

試題這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項(xiàng)：(1)詞數(shù)80-100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，要用上提示詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，最后寫出你的觀點(diǎn)。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。