Question

大千世界，無(wú)奇不有。相信同學(xué)們也遇到過(guò)這類(lèi)謊言、騙局或謠言。假設(shè)你叫李明，是紅星（Hongxing）中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹；

描述一次類(lèi)似的經(jīng)歷，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受；

以后再經(jīng)歷這樣的事，作為學(xué)生，我們?cè)撛趺醋�？�?qǐng)?zhí)岢鰞蓚�(gè)建議或做法。

作文要求：

不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；

語(yǔ)句連貫，次數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first._____________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

面對(duì)謊言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him. Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for him if he asked.

As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.

That’s all. Thank you. (95 words)

面對(duì)騙局

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.

As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.

That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)

面對(duì)謠言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.

As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.

That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)

【解析】這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文,寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿介紹自己的一次經(jīng)歷,并針對(duì)自己的經(jīng)歷提出兩點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合本文題材可知,寫(xiě)作中首先要對(duì)自己的情況簡(jiǎn)要介紹,并注意用語(yǔ)的禮貌性,如開(kāi)頭對(duì)聽(tīng)眾進(jìn)行問(wèn)候,結(jié)尾表達(dá)謝意等.結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文時(shí)態(tài)涉及過(guò)去,現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)三種時(shí)態(tài),注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。