Question

【題目】研究表明音樂對人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂來調(diào)節(jié)心情。請根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文。

聽前的情緒狀態(tài)	適用音樂	聽后的心境
壓力大，過分焦慮	流行音樂	放松
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過度	鄉(xiāng)村音樂	平靜
困倦、疲勞	搖滾音樂	振奮
孤獨、悲傷	（自擬內(nèi)容）	（自擬內(nèi)容）

參考詞匯：鄉(xiāng)村音樂：country music搖滾音樂：rock music古典音樂：classical music

爵士樂：jazz music 民間： folk music 交響樂：symphonic music

Recently, a new research shows that different kinds of music can influence different moods. Now would you please talk about the function of music.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫音樂對人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂來調(diào)節(jié)心情，動筆之前應(yīng)首先考慮運用那些句式表達短文提到的5種情況，一定要避免句式重復(fù)。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；運用不同的句式使文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。如賓語從句that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定語從句who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；條件狀語從句If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；時間狀語從句When I feel lonely and sad；目的狀語從句so that you will feel excited again；結(jié)果狀語從句so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 整篇文章顯示了作者具有較高的英語水平，達到了學以致用的程度,值得我們學習。