Question

【題目】書面表達

假設聯(lián)合國教科文組織正在舉行“保護地球”英文征文活動，請以“Save the Earth！”為題寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：

現(xiàn)狀	1. 地球變臟、變暖； 2. 動植物處于危險之中；
原因	1. 砍伐森林、殺戮動物； 2.（其他原因，請至少列出一個）
建議	保護地球，從我做起； 1. 不吃野生動物； 2. 使用紙的雙面； 3.（其他建議，請至少列出一個）

注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右。短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使短

文連貫、通順；開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學校姓名和人名；

Save the earth

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past.

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I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However,it’s getting dirtier and warmer now. Natural disasters happen more often than before.

Why does this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people cut down forests and kill too many animals.

What can we do then? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We can also use both sides of the paper and plant more trees.

I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，文章內(nèi)容十分明確。并且給出了相關信息。在寫作時，主要文章的結構要清晰，不要漏掉信息點。可以以第一人稱寫，寫作時要注意句子的完整性，做到主謂一致�？梢赃m當使用一些連詞，使文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。

寫作亮點：文中用到了一些好的句型，如：Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past；First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people cut down forests and kill too many animals.給文章增色不少。