Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的好朋友 Lisa 不久前參加達(dá)人秀 (Talent show) 節(jié)目被淘汰了，她為這次失敗所困擾，無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，建議她正確地看待達(dá)人秀節(jié)目，享受參與的過(guò)程而不必太在意結(jié)果；提醒她實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的途徑有很多，只有努力才能獲得成功；鼓勵(lì)她好好學(xué)習(xí)，也不放棄個(gè)人愛好，開心地度過(guò)每一天。
注意：
1)、要求要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言流暢，層次分明，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，卷面工整，書寫美觀。
2)、要求80詞左右，開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3)、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名等信息。
Dear Lisa,
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't make it to the final in the talent show.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lisa, I'm sorry to hear that you didn't make it to the final in the talent show. You must be feeling down now. As your friend, I have something to say about this whole thing. Yes, talent shows may change some people's future. These shows offer great opportunities for people to realize their dreams. However, we can't deny the fact that only a few of them are extraordinarily talented, so there is no need to take the result too seriously. It is not always necessarily a good thing for teenagers to become famous overnight. So just enjoy the process of getting involved. Although there are many ways to be successful, only by working hard can you achieve your goals. As a teenager, you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time. This, without doubt, will enrich your future life. I hope you'll be happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua
【解析】這篇書面表達(dá)是李華寫給好朋友Lisa的一封電子郵件，對(duì)她參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰這件事進(jìn)行安慰，讓她正確地看待達(dá)人秀節(jié)目，提醒她實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的途徑有很多，只有努力才能獲得成功；鼓勵(lì)她好好學(xué)習(xí)，也不放棄個(gè)人愛好，開心地度過(guò)每一天。第一要確定人稱，文章應(yīng)該用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行勸慰“you”。第二確定時(shí)態(tài)，文章應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。寫作內(nèi)容最好分三段，第一段寫引起全文的句子。第二段寫達(dá)人秀節(jié)目的作用以及怎樣正確看待被淘汰這個(gè)結(jié)果，進(jìn)行勸慰。第三段寫成功和快樂(lè)的途徑。表達(dá)時(shí)注意運(yùn)用好句型，好短語(yǔ)，可以增加作文的亮點(diǎn)。