Question

【題目】短文寫(xiě)作

近段時(shí)間，這張照片刷爆朋友圈。假如你是Helen，請(qǐng)結(jié)合對(duì)這張圖片的感悟，以“Thanks for Being My Parents”為題，給父母寫(xiě)一封英文信。詞數(shù)100左右。

要點(diǎn)要求：1. 一段自己記憶深刻的經(jīng)歷；2. 表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感激之情。

注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名、校名等。

Thanks for Being My Parents

Dear Mom and Dad,

I consider you as the most important people in my life. With your love and care, I am growing up happily and healthily.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear mom and dad

I consider you as the most important people in my life. With your love and care, I am growing up happily and healthily. You make my life full of surprises.

I still remember one thing you did for me last year. I love TF Boys a lot. And they planned to give a concert in our city last June. However, I couldn’t go there because of the coming exam. It really made me upset. During those days, I didn’t say anything more at home, because nothing could cheer me up but their songs. To my surprise, when I got home from school the day before the concert began, I found a ticket to the concert on my bed. I couldn’t help crying at that moment. I felt so excited that I rushed out and gave each of you a warm hug with a big smile.

Thank you for what you have done for me. I will never forget your care and love. Thanks for being my parents. And I will do more things for you to show my gratitude.

Yours,

Helen

【解析】

本文是一篇話題作文。

根據(jù)要求，要結(jié)合圖片談感悟。圖片上有兩句話——圍墻內(nèi)，孩子在體育中考；圍墻外，父母爬墻翹首以盼。結(jié)合題目Thanks for Being My Parents，感悟肯定是感謝父母。根據(jù)要求1. 一段自己記憶深刻的經(jīng)歷；2. 表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感激之情。

英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：

第一部分：點(diǎn)明中心——感謝我的父母。

第二部分：交代具體經(jīng)歷。注意這一部分是回憶，用過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)。

第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題——感激父母。