Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。

在校	老師	工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛心
	學(xué)生	…… (至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn))
周末	作業(yè)	作業(yè)多．舍棄愛好
	其它活動(dòng)	鍛煉，電視
愿望	…… (發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn))

要求：

1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：

2．文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

Answer 1

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.

As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.

At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.

No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.

【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多種特殊比較級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。