Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

生活中有許多一瞬間的美好，它們也許會(huì)給你留下永遠(yuǎn)的回憶，你身邊的每個(gè)人對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)都具有特殊的意義。請(qǐng)以“My special ________”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個(gè)成員或你的朋友、老師、同學(xué)等，以及你們共同經(jīng)歷的某個(gè)美好回憶。

要求：條理清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確， 字跡工整，80詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My special grandma

My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.

When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing she’s best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的家庭成員，朋友、老師或同學(xué)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My grandma is ...；She always helps...；When I am...；My grandma is ...及I know...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)喜愛(ài)所描述的人。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了自己的奶奶，接下來(lái)介紹奶奶的特點(diǎn)，最后指出他們互相關(guān)愛(ài)。此處用了helps me out， in trouble，with my grandma，is good at，等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。